Driving home on I-5
“Driving” home
on I-5
through the fog
after the long Thanksgiving holiday
is not something
I would soon
care
to repeat.

“Driving” home
on I-5
through the fog
after the long Thanksgiving holiday
is not something
I would soon
care
to repeat.

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comments: 3 so far...
JS
This is an _almost_ haiku. Lesse, how about:
“Driving” home on 5
Through the fog, post Thanksgiving
Makes me want to puke
Leona
Gah! My sister and I were heading south through the same blasted fog. My eyeballs were SO BORED!
justin
JS, fixed something in that first line that went wonky. Nice.
Leona, we were thinking about you, knowing you were driving in the opposite direction.